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As We Say Our Goodbyes

a short story

Tommy Paley
18 min readJun 23, 2021
Photo by Rémi Walle on Unsplash

“How has it come to this?” Lawrence silently wondered or possibly not so silently as the nearby patrons of the coffee shop looked his way with a mix of disdain and genuine interest in case the question was the beginning of a riddle.

Lawrence continued to stare out the window with the occasional glance at the window itself as the glasswork was impeccable. He’d grown up with a verging-on-concerning appreciation for glass.

And, as he sat, completely oblivious to his surroundings — one of his defining features — he remembered the early days; when he and Suzanne first met.

Those early days were dominated by colours — reds and greens and whatever colour was created when you mixed red and green together, he didn’t know and didn’t care to find out — as well as a cacophony of sounds and copious amounts of rough sandpaper that they bought on a whim and then had no real idea how to use.

They wanted those early days to go on forever until they were told — repeatedly by their increasingly-frustrated couples counsellor who also doubled as a increasingly-frustrated coat rack — that they seemed to be struggling with a full understanding of the terms “early” and “forever” and “days”.

And then, almost over night, the cracks started to appear. And then, as cracks often did…

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Tommy Paley
Tommy Paley

Written by Tommy Paley

I write creative non-fiction, humorous and random short stories, unique and tasty recipes and fiction involving odd and funny relationships. I also love cheese.

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